Sunday, December 13, 2009

Well? Can we?

Keeping in mind what we have beenn discussing in class, please read the following editorial. Do you agree with the opinion put forth the by the editors?
Response due Wednesday December 16th by midnight.

December 13, 2009
Editorial

Can We Afford It?

Republican critics have a fiercely argued list of reasons to oppose health care reform. One that is resonating is that the nation cannot afford in tough economic times to add a new trillion-dollar health care entitlement.

We understand why Americans may be skittish, but the argument is at best disingenuous and at worst a flat misrepresentation. Over the next two decades, the pending bills would actually reduce deficits by a small amount and reforms in how medical care is delivered and paid for — begun now on a small scale — could significantly reduce future deficits. Here is a closer look at the benefits and costs of health care reform:

STATUS QUO IS UNSUSTAINABLE More than 46 million Americans have no insurance, and millions more have such poor coverage that a severe illness threatens bankruptcy. Small employers are dropping coverage because of the cost. Those lucky enough to have insurance are struggling with higher premiums and co-payments, and worry that if they are laid off they could lose coverage.

Without reform, that bad situation will only get worse. The Commonwealth Fund, a respected research organization, warned that the average premium for family coverage in employer-sponsored policies would almost double in the coming decade, from about $12,300 in 2008 to $23,800 in 2020, with part paid by workers and part by employers. Premiums are also soaring for individuals who buy their own coverage directly.

BUT A TRILLION DOLLARS? Both the House and Senate bills would cover more than 30 million of the uninsured, and fully pay for it — in part by raising taxes (either on wealthy Americans or high-premium health plans and certain manufacturers and insurers) and in part by cutting payments to health care providers and private plans that serve Medicare patients.

A trillion dollars is still a lot of money, but it needs to be put in some perspective. Extending Bush-era tax cuts for the wealthy would very likely cost $4 trillion over the next decade. And the Medicare prescription drug benefit, passed by a Republican-dominated Congress, is expected to cost at least $700 billion over the next decade. Unlike this health care reform, it became law with no offsetting cuts and very little provision to pay for it.

YES, THEY OVER-PROMISED President Obama and his aides have, at times, made it sound as if health care reform was the answer to runaway deficits and soaring premiums. That is true in the long run, but not now.

The Congressional Budget Office projects that the vast majority of Americans, those covered by employer-sponsored insurance, would see little change or a modest decline in their average premiums under the Senate bill. It predicts that the bills would reduce deficits in the first decade by a modest $130 billion or so and perhaps $650 billion in the next decade — a small share of the burden.

Critics scoff that Congress will never carry out the required cuts in payments to Medicare providers. It is true that Congress has repeatedly deferred draconian cuts in doctors’ reimbursements. It has had no reluctance imposing other savings. The Center on Budget and Policy Priorities, a liberal analytical group, examined every major Medicare cut in deficit reduction bills over the past two decades. Virtually all of the savings imposed in the 1990, 1993 and 2005 bills survived intact. So did 80 percent of the savings in the 1997 Balanced Budget Act.

There is an easy way to stiffen Congress’s spine: it should adopt separate pay-as-you-go rules that would require that any concession to providers be paid for by tax increases or compensating cuts in other programs.

SHOULD WE GIVE UP ON SAVINGS? The House and Senate bills, and the stimulus legislation, have a lot of ideas that could bring down costs over time.

Electronic medical records could eliminate redundant tests; standardized forms and automated claims processing could save hundreds of billions of dollars; “effectiveness” research would help doctors avoid costly treatments that don’t work; various pilot projects devised to foster better coordination of care and a shift away from fee-for-service toward fixed payments for a year’s worth of a patient’s care all show some promise.

These reforms are mostly untested. And the C.B.O. is properly cautious when it says that it does not see much if any savings for the government during the next decade, in part because of upfront costs and in part because no one knows what will work. These efforts are unlikely to be tried on any serious scale without reform.

NO SINGLE FIX The debate is not over and sensible proposals are emerging in the Senate to strengthen cost control. Various amendments would increase the penalties for hospitals that infect patients, let Americans import cheaper drugs from abroad and modestly increase the powers of a new commission that is supposed to recommend ways to reduce Medicare costs. The House bill has cost-cutting measures that could be incorporated into a final bill, including authority for the government to negotiate lower drug prices for Medicare beneficiaries.

Aggressive testing of promising ideas should increase the likelihood of ultimate success. And millions of uninsured Americans should not be forced to wait until all the answers are found.

Thursday, December 10, 2009

Frozen Fish? What do we do now?

Please read the op-ed below. What are the implications of their findings on the obesity epidemic in America? Please write a well thought out response and be sure to cite evidence from the article in your response.
All responses due Saturday December 12th by midnight.


Happy Writing!

Catch of the Freezer

GO local. Eat organic. Buy fresh. Those food mantras continue to make waves among environmentally conscious consumers. But — as is often the case in these climate-conscious times — if the motivation is to truly make our diets more earth-friendly, then perhaps we need a new mantra: Buy frozen.

Several years ago, the three of us — two ecological economists and one food system researcher — teamed up in an effort to understand how to develop sustainable food systems to feed a planet of nine billion by 2050. As the focus of our study, we chose salmon, an important source of protein around the world and a food that is available nearly anywhere at any time, regardless of season or local supply.

We examined the salmon’s life cycle: how the fish are caught in the wild, what they’re fed when farmed, how they’re processed and transported and how they’re consumed.

And what did we find in our research? When it comes to salmon, the questions of organic versus conventional and wild versus farmed matter less than whether the fish is frozen or fresh. In many cases, fresh salmon has about twice the environmental impact as frozen salmon.

The reason: Most salmon consumers live far from where the fish was caught or farmed, and the majority of salmon fillets they buy are fresh and shipped by air, which is the world’s most carbon-intensive form of travel. Flying fillets from Alaska, British Columbia, Norway, Scotland or Chile so that 24 hours later they can be served “fresh” in New York adds an enormous climate burden, one that swamps the potential benefits of organic farming or sustainable fishing. (Disclosure: A nonprofit subsidiary of Ecotrust, the North Pacific Fisheries Trust, lends money to sustainable fisheries.)

Fresh fish is wonderful and healthful, and if it’s driven a reasonable distance to market, then its relative environmental impact is low. Fortunately for conscientious diners, when fish is flash-frozen at sea, its taste and quality is practically indistinguishable from fresh. More important, it can be moved thousands of miles by container ship, rail or even truck at much lower environmental impact than when air freighted. If seafood-loving Japanese consumers, who get most of their fish via air shipments, were to switch to 75 percent frozen salmon, it would have a greater ecological benefit than all of Europe and North America eating only locally farmed or caught salmon.

Is the future full of fish sticks? No. But when it comes to eating seafood from halfway around the world, we need to get over our fetish for fresh. With the challenges facing the world’s oceans mounting, buying frozen is a powerful choice that concerned eaters everywhere can make.

Astrid Scholz is the vice president of knowledge systems at Ecotrust in Portland, Ore. Ulf Sonesson is a researcher at the Swedish Institute for Food and Biotechnology. Peter Tyedmers is a professor at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia.

Sunday, December 6, 2009

Intellectual Hypocrites

Below is a link to a recent LA Times Op-Ed. The writer, Jonah Goldberg, makes an interesting claim using several rhetorical techniques we have studied. Again, please identify the claim and the rhetorical devices. Additionally, tell me what you think of his assertion. Do you agree or disagree? why?

Responses due by Wednesday December 9th at midnight.
Thanks!

http://www.latimes.com/news/opinion/commentary/la-oe-goldberg1-2009dec01,0,6017988.column

Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Who is to blame?

The following is a recent column by Maureen Dowd. She provides some harsh commentary on the recent White House party crashers.
http://www.nytimes.com/2009/12/02/opinion/02dowd.html?_r=1&ref=opinion


Your task is to:
a) identify at least two rhetorical devices
b) Describe the effect the devices have on you as a reader
c) provide your opinion. Consider the question-who is to blame for the security breach?

Responses due Saturday December 5th by midnight.

PS-I have enjoyed your recent responses! Your analysis and writing have improved. I am quite proud of you!

Sunday, November 29, 2009

Cure for Obesity?

http://www.nytimes.com/2009/11/27/health/research/27brain.html?ref=science


Please read the above article. What are your thoughts about surgery as a cure for obesity?
Due Wednesday Dec. 2 by midnight.
Thanks.

Monday, November 23, 2009

Politically Correct or a reason for murder?

Read the following editorial and "Quote, Paraphrase, Respond."

http://www.latimes.com/news/opinion/la-oe-rodriguez23-2009nov23,0,5458020.column

Opinion

Ft. Hood and the bugaboo of 'political correctness'

Look deeper at a killer and what do you usually find? An angry, crazy person.

Gregory Rodriguez

November 23, 2009

The Ft. Hood massacre was not the first violent tragedy that conservatives have blamed on political correctness. But it might be the first one in which they actually have a point.

In March, commentator Glenn Beck suggested that Michael McLendon, the man who killed 10 people in the worst rampage in Alabama history, might have been "pushed to the wall" because he felt "silenced" by political correctness. (Conservatives, in particular, he said, are afraid to speak up because "you're called a racist.")

Ten years ago, former House Speaker Newt Gingrich blamed the infamous Columbine High School massacre -- in which teenagers Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold murdered 13 people and injured 21 others -- on the cultural contamination caused by decades of "political correctness" that "undermined the core values in American history." He said the two teenagers probably never realized they were robbing their victims of the "inalienable rights of life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness" because their teachers never taught them about the Constitution.

Let's face it, ever since the term was brought into popular usage in the 1990s, political correctness has been a convenient bête noire for conservatives. The PC label makes fun of the absurdities of the self-righteous liberal language police, and the right has done a bang-up job of spreading it around.

But the joke congealed into something nastier. Political correctness is not a powerful and deadly force, as prominent right-wing commentary would have us believe. But the term has become a kind of code for an essentially racial struggle over what it means to be American.

Take the three examples above of conservatives blaming mad violence on political correctness. In each case, those wielding the term are arguing that "Americans" have either been hamstrung in their ability to root out the bad guys (Ft. Hood), or have been induced to become bad guys themselves (Columbine and Alabama) by a PC regime that contaminated their heritage. But who are these Americans whose heritage and hands have been so tightly bound?

To answer that, it helps to remember why and how the culture of political correctness emerged. At best, the term refers to the active avoidance of expressions or actions that could exclude or offend minorities. It was this "soft" political correctness that led to our generally harmless acceptance of ethnic labels such as Native American in place of Indian, gender-neutral terms such as firefighter in place of fireman, and generally made members of the majority (i.e. white Americans) aware that not all Americans thought alike.

At worst, political correctness became an attempt to limit language, ideas and what was acceptable in public debate or conduct. Campus advocates have bullied or sought to silence those with opposing views. Oversensitive cultural watchdogs have encouraged stilted, self-conscious interactions -- between races, classes, genders or any minority group and the majority -- presumably to ensure that nobody was ever offended, not one tiny bit. Finally, and this may apply to the case of Maj. Nidal Hasan, workplace and legal regulations have made some bosses feel they could not fire even unsatisfactory minority employees for fear of being accused of discrimination.

For good or ill, political correctness was a response to the rapid diversification of the U.S. population and the perceived need to induce the majority population -- whites, or often more precisely white males -- to take into account the sensitivities and self-definitions of minorities of all kinds. That means the Americans who are considered to be victims of political correctness are members of the white majority. And the revolt against everything PC is driven by a sense that whites have bent over backward for -- and even sold out mainstream culture to -- minorities.

But is that true? Do blacks, women, Latinos, Native Americans or handicapped people, for that matter, have the United States in their proverbial pockets? Are the actions and lives of white people at large really impinged and shaped by the demands of these minority groups?

We do have an African American president, but can we even say members of that minority and others disproportionately hold seats of political or economic power in the country? White supremacist groups would say yes, but I don't think even Glenn Beck or Newt Gingrich would agree.

To be sure, the hazards of political correctness are not merely a figment of the right's imagination. In the case of Hasan, it may be that his problems and proclivities were ignored because his superiors feared they'd be accused of discrimination against a Muslim. And it's possible that his dangerous actions and behaviors were shrugged off as a matter of cultural sensitivity, or to provide the military with more strategic diversity.

But however PC things were during the major's career, what went wrong with him and the system surely can't be reduced to one bugaboo; it is deeper, broader and more complicated than that.

In any case, as conservatives should know, political correctness doesn't kill people -- angry, crazy people do.

grodriguez@latimescolumnists.com

Sunday, November 15, 2009

Mr. Toulmin and his model

We talk a lot about the "Toulmin Model," without really exploring the ideas that Stephen Toulmin put forth. This week I would like for you to explain what the Toulmin way of thinking means to you. Why do you think we use it? What are the benefits? What are the limitations? How can it be used in different types of writing and thinking?
Please be honest! Please respond to this post by Wednesday evening. I want to use this discussion in class on Thursday.

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

The Voice and Ms. Dowd

This week we have been discussing how to find our voices as writers. It takes years for some writers to develop a strong voice. They do so by consistently using the same rhetorical strategies in their writing. Below is a link to a columnist who is known for her strong, witty, and sometimes sarcastic voice. Please read the column and comment on how Maureen Down creates her voice.

As I am posting this post much later than anticipated, I will extend your time until Saturday November 12th at 5pm (that being I said, I strongly recommend you do it soon as the chances are very high you will forget once Saturday rolls around!).

11/13/ UPDATE: Apparently the link did not work (thanks Candace!), so I have posted the entire column in the body of this post.

September 20, 2009
Op-Ed Columnist

Blue Is the New Black

WASHINGTON

Women are getting unhappier, I told my friend Carl.

“How can you tell?” he deadpanned. “It’s always been whine-whine-whine.”

Why are we sadder? I persisted.

“Because you care,” he replied with a mock sneer. “You have feelings.”

Oh, that.

In the early ’70s, breaking out of the domestic cocoon, leaving their mothers’ circumscribed lives behind, young women felt exhilarated and bold.

But the more women have achieved, the more they seem aggrieved. Did the feminist revolution end up benefiting men more than women?

According to the General Social Survey, which has tracked Americans’ mood since 1972, and five other major studies around the world, women are getting gloomier and men are getting happier.

Before the ’70s, there was a gender gap in America in which women felt greater well-being. Now there’s a gender gap in which men feel better about their lives.

As Arianna Huffington points out in a blog post headlined “The Sad, Shocking Truth About How Women Are Feeling”: “It doesn’t matter what their marital status is, how much money they make, whether or not they have children, their ethnic background, or the country they live in. Women around the world are in a funk.”

(The one exception is black women in America, who are a bit happier than they were in 1972, but still not as happy as black men.)

Marcus Buckingham, a former Gallup researcher who has a new book out called “Find Your Strongest Life: What the Happiest and Most Successful Women Do Differently,” says that men and women passed each other midpoint on the graph of life.

“Though women begin their lives more fulfilled than men, as they age, they gradually become less happy,” Buckingham writes in his new blog on The Huffington Post, pointing out that this darker view covers feelings about marriage, money and material goods. “Men, in contrast, get happier as they get older.”

Buckingham and other experts dispute the idea that the variance in happiness is caused by women carrying a bigger burden of work at home, the “second shift.” They say that while women still do more cooking, cleaning and child-caring, the trend lines are moving toward more parity, which should make them less stressed.

When women stepped into male- dominated realms, they put more demands — and stress — on themselves. If they once judged themselves on looks, kids, hubbies, gardens and dinner parties, now they judge themselves on looks, kids, hubbies, gardens, dinner parties — and grad school, work, office deadlines and meshing a two-career marriage.

“Choice is inherently stressful,” Buckingham said in an interview. “And women are being driven to distraction.”

One area of extreme distraction is kids. “Across the happiness data, the one thing in life that will make you less happy is having children,” said Betsey Stevenson, an assistant professor at Wharton who co-wrote a paper called “The Paradox of Declining Female Happiness.” “It’s true whether you’re wealthy or poor, if you have kids late or kids early. Yet I know very few people who would tell me they wish they hadn’t had kids or who would tell me they feel their kids were the destroyer of their happiness.”

The more important things that are crowded into their lives, the less attention women are able to give to each thing.

Add this to the fact that women are hormonally more complicated and biologically more vulnerable. Women are much harder on themselves than men.

They tend to attach to other people more strongly, beat themselves up more when they lose attachments, take things more personally at work and pop far more antidepressants.

“Women have lives that become increasingly empty,” Buckingham said. “They’re doing more and feeling less.”

Another daunting thing: America is more youth and looks obsessed than ever, with an array of expensive cosmetic procedures that allow women to be their own Frankenstein Barbies.

Men can age in an attractive way while women are expected to replicate — and Restylane — their 20s into their 60s.

Buckingham says that greater prosperity has made men happier. And they are also relieved of bearing sole responsibility for their family finances, and no longer have the pressure of having women totally dependent on them.

Men also tend to fare better romantically as time wears on. There are more widows than widowers, and men have an easier time getting younger mates.

Stevenson looks on the bright side of the dark trend, suggesting that happiness is beside the point. We’re happy to have our newfound abundance of choices, she said, even if those choices end up making us unhappier.

A paradox, indeed.





http://www.nytimes.com/2009/09/20/opinion/20dowd.html?_r=1

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Free Expression?

There are two different viewpoints/claims presented in the article below. Your task is to find the claims, decide which one you agree with, then "quote, paraphrase, and respond!"
Thanks,

Ms. K

http://www.nytimes.com/2009/11/08/fashion/08cross.html?_r=1&ref=fashion

Monday, November 2, 2009

Happy Homecoming!

No post this week! Enjoy the festivities. Tell me something great, however!

Sunday, October 25, 2009

Precocious Precious

Please read the excerpt from a recent New York Times Magazine story. Respond to the director's claim in the last paragraph. Do you agree or disagree? Why? I have posted the link to the entire article if you are interested.

October 25, 2009

The Audacity of ‘Precious’

I.

At the Cannes International Film Festival in May, in the loud, chaotic bar at the Martinez Hotel, Lee Daniels seemed, as he often does, both ecstatic and nervous. He jumped, he slumped, his mood changing from giddy to anxious. He was the only black man in the crowded bar, a fact that he mentioned and then brushed away. He was dressed unremarkably in a loose, untucked shirt and slouchy khaki pants, but his hair, an electric corona of six-inch fusilli-like spirals, demanded notice. Although Daniels will be 50 this year, he has the bouncy, mercurial energy of a child. The previous night, at the gala screening of his movie “Precious,” which he directed and helped produce, he greeted the audience by saying, “I’m a little homo, I’m a little Euro and I’m a little ghetto.” The crowd cheered.

Daniels knows what he’s selling: his films combine street-smart bravado with an art-house sensibility. “Precious,” the harrowing story of a 350-pound illiterate teenage girl who is pregnant for the second time by her father and horribly abused by her mother, is shot in an almost-documentary style interspersed with fantasy sequences. (It opens Nov. 6.) Like most independent films, it is character-driven, and at its heart is a spirit of understanding. When Precious’s plight lands her in a special school, she blossoms: the audience’s initial rejection of Precious, even repulsion at the sight of her, slowly gives way to a kind of identification.

At Cannes, the film received a 15-minute standing ovation. “They wouldn’t stop clapping,” Daniels told me as he gulped a vodka. “I’m a director — after six minutes, I’m saying, please sit down. But I’m also a producer, so I’m thinking, what’s the record? Can we break the record for the longest standing ovation at the festival?”

Just a few months before its premiere at Cannes, “Precious” won three awards at the Sundance Film Festival, including a special jury prize for Mo’Nique, who plays Precious’s monstrous mother. Graphic as the film is, it is less so than “Push,” the 1996 novel on which it is based. Written by an African-American poet and writer known as Sapphire, “Push” relied on intentionally misspelled, broken and slangy English to convey Precious’s sense of despair and rage. The novel mixes poems by Precious with sexually extreme scenes, like those in which she is forced to perform oral sex on her mother. It is almost relentlessly bleak: when Precious discovers she is H.I.V.-positive, she is certain of her imminent death. Daniels’s movie, by contrast, offers a greater sense of possibility. He doesn’t ignore her disease, hardships or struggles, but he also liberates her from them. Precious is a stand-in for anyone — black, white, male, female — who has ever been devalued or underestimated.

Yet the movie is not neutral on the subject of race and the prejudices that swirl around it, even in the supposedly postracial age of Obama. “ ‘Precious’ is so not Obama,” Daniels said. “ ‘Precious’ is so not P.C. What I learned from doing the film is that even though I am black, I’m prejudiced. I’m prejudiced against people who are darker than me. When I was young, I went to a church where the lighter-skinned you were, the closer you sat to the altar. Anybody that’s heavy like Precious — I thought they were dirty and not very smart. Making this movie changed my heart. I’ll never look at a fat girl walking down the street the same way again.”

For some audiences, that may not be reason enough to make a movie that risks reinforcing old stereotypes. It’s a criticism Daniels has heard before. “As African-Americans, we are in an interesting place,” Daniels said. “Obama’s the president, and we want to aspire to that. But part of aspiring is disassociating from the face of Precious. To be honest, I was embarrassed to show this movie at Cannes. I didn’t want to exploit black people. And I wasn’t sure I wanted white French people to see our world.” He paused. “But because of Obama, it’s now O.K. to be black. I can share that voice. I don’t have to lie. I’m proud of where I come from. And I wear it like a shield. ‘Precious’ is part of that.”

Before he could untangle this thought, Daniels was interrupted by Thierry Frémaux, the director of the Cannes Film Festival, who had been sitting in a corner booth. “I love your movie,” he said. “It’s a beautiful movie.” Frémaux put out his hand to shake. “C’est incroyable!”

As Frémaux darted away, Daniels looked stunned, then gleeful, then serious. “I am so used to having two faces,” he said, as if to explain his theatrical shifts in mood. “A face that I had for black America and a face for white America. When Obama became president, I lost both faces. Now I only have one face. But old habits die hard, and sometimes I can’t remember who I’m supposed to be.”

http://www.nytimes.com/2009/10/25/magazine/25precious-t.html?_r=1&ref=magazine&pagewanted=all

Sunday, October 18, 2009

The Rockstar Opinion

The following is an op-ed by Bono, the lead singer of U2. Please read the article and respond with a summary of Bono's opinion and a response. Do you agree or disagree with his position? Why or why not?
Thank You!

http://www.nytimes.com/2009/10/18/opinion/18bono.html?_r=1&ref=opinion

Sunday, October 11, 2009

Zero Tolerance-Good Idea or Just Plain Silly?

The following is a link to a recent New York Times article about the zero tolerance policy for weapons in schools. Please read the article carefully and respond with a letter to the Editor stating your opinion. Do you agree or disagree with the school policy? Was it fair what happened to Zachary Christie? Why or why not? Please feel free to ask for clarification and please tell your friends that the blog entry for this week cannot be put off to Friday at 4:45!


http://www.nytimes.com/2009/10/12/education/12discipline.html

Monday, October 5, 2009

The Ethicist Response

Following is the response The Ethicist gave to the query posed last week. Please read it and evaluate the response. Is Randy Cohen (The Ethicist himself) correct? Please write a letter to Randy Cohen either agreeing or disagreeing with his response.

Alas, there is no way to precisely calibrate when rude changes state to unethical, like water to ice. But it’s true that to annoy those few audience members near you is bad and to hinder the performers is worse, potentially undermining the concert for everyone and thereby doing greater harm.

What’s important is when this fellow’s affliction hit. We do not condemn people for things over which they have no control, like the unexpected onset of a cold or a sudden attack of hay fever. (Although, if this fellow realized his nose-blowing would persist, he should have left the hall.) But if the honker knew or should have known before arriving at the concert that he was apt to be a nasal nuisance, even to just those around him, he had a duty to gulp down powerful decongestants or simply stay home.

Tuesday, September 29, 2009

My Mom said. . .

It really is inspiring to read your students responses. Too often the only information about young people is about their failings and like anything else, perception becomes reality for adults. I know that the majority of children are good and have aspirations and dreams that will, if allowed to come to fruition, benefit not only themselves, but this big blue marble!

Good Luck!

Mom

No need to respond, I just though t you should know what people are saying about you, my wonderful awe inspiring students!

Sunday, September 27, 2009

The Ethicist-Unethical Audiences?

The following is another question posed by a reader of the New York Times' The Ethicist column by Randy Cohen (note: Randy Cohen is the columnist, not the one posing the question). Please respond to the query with your advice. Include evidence to support your answer.


I sing in a chorus at Lincoln Center. One evening while the baritone performed a particularly difficult solo, an emotionally demanding a cappella passage, an audience member in the first-tier box, only five feet from the stage, started blowing his nose loudly and continued to do so for the duration of the solo; even his companions were gesturing for him to pipe down. Making disruptive noises at a concert is certainly rude, but if you are sitting close enough to distract the performers, does it rise to unethical? J.C., NEW YORK

Friday, September 18, 2009

The Ethicist Response

The following is Randy Cohen's response to the previous scenario of the cell phone user on the bus. Please read his response carefully and write a comment which explains:
1) Whether or not you agree with him and 2) What literary devices does he use to persuade his reader? Provide an example from the text to support your answer.

Randy Cohen writes:
You should have grabbed her phone and pummeled her with it mercilessly while screaming: ''Shut up! Shut up! Shut up!'' No, no. You can't do that. You should simply have grabbed her phone and thrown it out the window. And reveled in the cheers of your fellow sufferers.
O.K., not that either.
Her misbehavior falls between manners and morals and is difficult to rebuke because cellphones are a new technology; the social codes governing their use are still evolving. Here's my guideline: don't impose your cellphone conversation on people confined in a closed space -- a bus, a restaurant, a commuter train. If your loquacity prevents those trapped nearby from reading or working or simply thinking their own thoughts, then cut it out.
You correctly suggest that different social settings permit different behavior.
I can't ask everyone at a Jets game to pipe down so I can read my book. And there are different expectations at McDonald's than at the Four Seasons. Courtesy, however, is not reserved for the wealthy: even folks who can afford only the bargain bus are entitled to consideration.
As you imply, the ordinary conversation of your fellow passengers may be as loud as the cellphone prattler's, but it's not just a matter of decibels.
We forbid playing radios or saxophones on the bus (and I trust you keep your Walkman low); we can reasonably ban innovative sources of clamor and din like cellphones. Custom, too, has its claims.
You had every right to ask this passenger to curb her logorrhea, but it is not likely she would have complied.
The bus driver, had he been an English speaker, might have had more success: he commands moral authority that passengers lack. Better still, the bus company should post this clear policy: one quick phone call to make travel plans, and that's it. Your other recourse is the small electronic jamming device, the perfect gift for any occasion, but one that is, alas, illegal in many jurisdictions.
Alternatively, I propose this federal law: unless your cellphone conversation is amusing or intriguing, you must shut up.


As always, your response will not be graded if it is received after 5pm on Friday September 25th.

Friday, September 11, 2009

The Ethicist.

The following is from the New York Times column The Ethicist. Please respond in the comment box as to how you would advise the reader. Make sure you justify your response with evidence from your experience or the collective human experience. Remember to post your response by Friday September 18th at 5pm.

Chatter Bus
By RANDY COHEN


On the noisy $10 Chinatown bus from New York to Boston, the girl behind me spent the entire four hours on her cellphone, telling the same inane story to five different people. I wanted to ask her to stop, but I didn't know if I should, considering the price of the ride and that I don't mind noise in general, just her nasal, repetitive noise. What should I have done?
Justine Van Der Leun, New York

Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Welcome Seniors!

Dear AP Language Students,

I hope you all had a productive and exciting summer. This year you will be required to check this blog for additional resources and assignments.

Your summer assignment was to read A Long Way Gone, by Ishmael Beah. Please briefly describe (in the comments section) your emotional reaction to the book. Were you affected by his story? Did you do any additional research after reading the book? Why do you think I assigned this book?

Thanks. I am looking forward to a great year!

Oh and P.S.- Mark your calendars!
English Language AP Test Wednesday, May 12th, 2010 at 8AM!